Great job, you guys! Intense, and very moving. I think Noah has a lot of emotional work yet to do, and hopefully he and Luke can work through it together.
I loved this part:
Luke's heart breaks in new places as he watches the struggle play out across his lover's face. Lovers. And that's what they are. No one, not Ameera, not the Colonel, not anyone can take this moment away. Ever. He winces as those poisoned names attempt to insinuate their way into his brain, but he shakes his head. He is stronger than them. They are stronger together.
Just a note... your italics seem to be messed up a bit (there is something missing at the very start, and then about halfay through, everything switches to italics).
All this fanfic being posted is making me want to write... which is a good thing, I hope! :)
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Date: 2008-05-12 02:52 pm (UTC)I loved this part:
Luke's heart breaks in new places as he watches the struggle play out across his lover's face. Lovers. And that's what they are. No one, not Ameera, not the Colonel, not anyone can take this moment away. Ever. He winces as those poisoned names attempt to insinuate their way into his brain, but he shakes his head. He is stronger than them. They are stronger together.
Just a note... your italics seem to be messed up a bit (there is something missing at the very start, and then about halfay through, everything switches to italics).
All this fanfic being posted is making me want to write... which is a good thing, I hope! :)