I am so glad I’m not the only one who thinks she’s going to hell for writing Jansis, but does anyway. But you write it so much better then me!
I loved all of this, too much to actually quote, so I’ll pick my favorite section:
Okay, well, umm, in my mind you always taste good. Salty, I guess, but sexy. Like your mouth on set. Those three lines are completely brilliant.
It was so great with Van rambling about Jake being so tall and looking at him with those blue eyes. More love.
And then when Jake admitted that he was in love with Van? My heart kind of melted. It was a complete puddle at my feet when Van told Jake to come over.
Thank you for this, and don’t feel so bad about writing it. When it’s this good, how could you not share it? ~Ali
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Date: 2008-08-26 12:09 pm (UTC)I loved all of this, too much to actually quote, so I’ll pick my favorite section:
Okay, well, umm, in my mind you always taste good. Salty, I guess, but sexy. Like your mouth on set. Those three lines are completely brilliant.
It was so great with Van rambling about Jake being so tall and looking at him with those blue eyes. More love.
And then when Jake admitted that he was in love with Van? My heart kind of melted. It was a complete puddle at my feet when Van told Jake to come over.
Thank you for this, and don’t feel so bad about writing it. When it’s this good, how could you not share it? ~Ali