Please forgive how far behind I am on proper feedback. You have been so prolific and the hayloft is fucking rocking! Literally. Lots of fucking going on.
This is, oh honey, just...There is something about these boys that goes right into my gut something sharp and fierce and immediate. Everything about this 'verse is utterly flawless. A lot of times, when writers do AUs, they just take the exact same characters and plunk them down in another place and time. But with this, you have crafted these two entirely new characters with imperfections and fears and histories and scars all their own, yet we recognize them as Luke and Noah enough to make our hearts ache for them just that much more.
The kissing was such a brilliant idea, so intensely intimate, I was holdign my breath the whole time. And how it let Noah start pouring these fears out, which to an outsider he must seem still so closed off, but Luke gets it. So beautifully. I know we've talked about what a fine line Luke has to walk here in not judging or condescending to Noah but not exploiting or fetishing his profession either. That was the one thing that made me wary of rentboy fic, but, dear, you have crafted a Luke that is perfection on this (and, well, everything).
I adore you and this series and I hope it goes on forever. So what are the elevator boys up to these days?
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This is, oh honey, just...There is something about these boys that goes right into my gut something sharp and fierce and immediate. Everything about this 'verse is utterly flawless. A lot of times, when writers do AUs, they just take the exact same characters and plunk them down in another place and time. But with this, you have crafted these two entirely new characters with imperfections and fears and histories and scars all their own, yet we recognize them as Luke and Noah enough to make our hearts ache for them just that much more.
The kissing was such a brilliant idea, so intensely intimate, I was holdign my breath the whole time. And how it let Noah start pouring these fears out, which to an outsider he must seem still so closed off, but Luke gets it. So beautifully. I know we've talked about what a fine line Luke has to walk here in not judging or condescending to Noah but not exploiting or fetishing his profession either. That was the one thing that made me wary of rentboy fic, but, dear, you have crafted a Luke that is perfection on this (and, well, everything).
I adore you and this series and I hope it goes on forever. So what are the elevator boys up to these days?