This whole chapter is has crushed me, and is beautiful. I like how they're testing each other, watching them be uncertain and tentative is just so GUH. I'm running out of superlatives with you. Splendid. That's it. In the most heartbreaking way.
The flavor of Luke bursts on his tongue, sweet and creamy with the sharp tang of coffee and innocence underneath. Noah doesn't know what he's doing exactly, but he knows how to give head. The sweetness of the first line clashing with the grittiness of the next makes sums my entire feelings about how truly marvelous this whole fic is.
The making out was so, again, physical and smoking hot. I melted. Like others mentioned before, love the 15-year old lines.
And does it make me a sadist if I completely love the way you write Noah crashing and burning every single time?
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I like how they're testing each other, watching them be uncertain and tentative is just so GUH. I'm running out of superlatives with you. Splendid. That's it. In the most heartbreaking way.
The flavor of Luke bursts on his tongue, sweet and creamy with the sharp tang of coffee and innocence underneath. Noah doesn't know what he's doing exactly, but he knows how to give head. The sweetness of the first line clashing with the grittiness of the next makes sums my entire feelings about how truly marvelous this whole fic is.
The making out was so, again, physical and smoking hot. I melted. Like others mentioned before, love the 15-year old lines.
And does it make me a sadist if I completely love the way you write Noah crashing and burning every single time?