ext_56363 ([identity profile] mightyten.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] nouveau_monday 2008-03-24 11:54 am (UTC)

Sorry it has taken me so very long to comment! I absolutely adored this beyond words, but I'll do my best ;)

What a gift that we got TWO voracious bottoms fics in this fandom right about the same time. And what a testament to you and merepersiflage that both are 100% believable and in character, even thought the "bottoms" are switched.

My heart constantly breaks for your Noah - that he has carried around this profound need inside of him for so very long. When the damn finally breaks and he "confesses" to Luke - simply stunning. And even though this is mostly a Noah POV, Luke's desire to comfort and please and care for Noah shines through every single word. Oh, Luke.

The sex is ridiculously hot, too.

Thank you!

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