I'm so SO sorry I didn't comment sooner. I saw this and was so excited that you got me but I made myself not read this till after I posted mine. Which ended up being late. Because I was seconding guessing myself because I haven't written in a little while. But anyways, I posted so this was my reward!
I was thinking about this 'verse the other day when you posted about your fic roundup. It's ridiculously awesome that you wrote this for the gift exchange because it's still my favorite thing ever. Rentboy!Noah is a close second but magnets holds such a special place in my heart because it's the first fic I read from you and got SO totally invested in. I just, gosh I could gush about it forever because it means so much to me. I'm so thrilled you are gonna give it a nice ending.
I just love these boys in this. Esp. this piece. This is how they should have made up on the show - complete with the soon to be fucking. ;) But the tension and emotion and everything here, sigh. SO perfect. It's organic and real and they just WANT each other so much.
Luke's sigh, the heat of his breath even with the tinge of alcohol, the scrape of his teeth on Noah's skin multiply, expand exponentially. "You don't even know what your words do to me? How much I ache to hold you down and beg you to let me near you. God, Noah, want to crawl inside your skin until you can never shake me again." He licks into Noah's mouth, traces sharp canines before sucking carefully at his tongue. "I know we need to talk, need to figure this out. But not right now, okay? Take me to the farm. Let me take you from there."
GOD I love this part. I all that Luke says and what he wants and the way you layed it out. Just amazing.
Noah swiped at his eyes with their joined hands. "A slice of forever? The better part of it? The best part of now? God, Luke, just need your arms around me. I need your breath in my ear while we sleep."
The breath in the ear line made me all weak. Poor Noah, he just loves Luke so much it hurts him not to be with him. And having Noah all teary always breaks my heart.
I also adored the lines that Ronnie picked out. The ending was perfect - Luke's mouth has been prominent in this 'verse, yes?
Thank you thank you thank you for this. It was such a nice surprise and made the New Year lovely. Take your time with the second part, no rush at all. I'm just tickled that you did this for me at all. I adore you as well. SO much. ♥ ♥ ♥
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I was thinking about this 'verse the other day when you posted about your fic roundup. It's ridiculously awesome that you wrote this for the gift exchange because it's still my favorite thing ever. Rentboy!Noah is a close second but magnets holds such a special place in my heart because it's the first fic I read from you and got SO totally invested in. I just, gosh I could gush about it forever because it means so much to me. I'm so thrilled you are gonna give it a nice ending.
I just love these boys in this. Esp. this piece. This is how they should have made up on the show - complete with the soon to be fucking. ;) But the tension and emotion and everything here, sigh. SO perfect. It's organic and real and they just WANT each other so much.
Luke's sigh, the heat of his breath even with the tinge of alcohol, the scrape of his teeth on Noah's skin multiply, expand exponentially. "You don't even know what your words do to me? How much I ache to hold you down and beg you to let me near you. God, Noah, want to crawl inside your skin until you can never shake me again." He licks into Noah's mouth, traces sharp canines before sucking carefully at his tongue. "I know we need to talk, need to figure this out. But not right now, okay? Take me to the farm. Let me take you from there."
GOD I love this part. I all that Luke says and what he wants and the way you layed it out. Just amazing.
Noah swiped at his eyes with their joined hands. "A slice of forever? The better part of it? The best part of now? God, Luke, just need your arms around me. I need your breath in my ear while we sleep."
The breath in the ear line made me all weak. Poor Noah, he just loves Luke so much it hurts him not to be with him. And having Noah all teary always breaks my heart.
I also adored the lines that Ronnie picked out. The ending was perfect - Luke's mouth has been prominent in this 'verse, yes?
Thank you thank you thank you for this. It was such a nice surprise and made the New Year lovely. Take your time with the second part, no rush at all. I'm just tickled that you did this for me at all. I adore you as well. SO much. ♥ ♥ ♥